Dan giving us feedback on our opening in progress:
- More facial close up of characters
- Make jump starts smoother
- Locker scene don't bring truth - show maybe Nadia being bullied? pushed about?
- More subgroups then racial - maybe take out
- Handsome boy - face shot to be seen
- Cut jakirs scene more shorter to narrate story better
- Too much of thahminas head, show more of her face
- Have a sense of rhythem - jumpstarts need to be more sync
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