Feedback from Editing day 4

DANS FEEDBACK TO OUR GROUP

 

 

Crucial criticism feedback:

1. More facial close up of characters
2. Make jump starts smoother
3. Locker scene don't bring truth - show maybe Nadia being bullied? pushed about?
4. More subgroups then racial - maybe take out
5. Handsome boy - face shot to be seen
6. Cut jakirs scene more shorter to narrate story better
7. Too much of thahminas head, show more of her face
8. Have a sense of rhythem - jumpstarts need to be more sync
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